New Comp. - Technotic Jives

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New Comp. - Technotic Jives

Postby Jayster » Tue Oct 11, 2011 12:33 am

Hey yall, here's an original I had to do for a class of mine. It was supposed to fit an electric dance tune and it did for a while until I decided to put in the bass solo, lol. In any case, I'm happy with it, even if it doesn't fit the genre as well as I would have hoped. I don't think I'm quite done with it yet, but I was strapped on time so this is what I'm presenting. I've got a lot of ideas and I want to make the song longer, so I may put up a new version later. For now, check it out, and feedback is welcome of course!

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Re: New Comp. - Technotic Jives

Postby Nostril » Sat Nov 12, 2011 5:09 am

Lol, pretty fun track! I like the very synthy sounds and the swing in the rhythm. It's something I would listen to if I were going for a crazy girl's night out while putting on my lip-gloss and blue leather jumpsuit (I'm a guy).
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Re: New Comp. - Technotic Jives

Postby Jayster » Tue Nov 22, 2011 1:56 am

Thanks a lot! This piece was basically the result of a lot of experimentation with a new DAW I've been using, so at least it sounds decent. Not too sure about the whole "girl's night out" thing but whatever. Definitely wasn't written with that type of thing in mind.
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Re: New Comp. - Technotic Jives

Postby Nostril » Tue Nov 22, 2011 4:12 am

Hahahaha, yeah. Sometimes I say stupid things. Sounds great anyway, easy to imagine in a video game.
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